Prox's Poem

Ok guys, well yea, i had my BEST friend in mind, that i love to death, and well i wrote her a poem, felt like sharing it with your guys...

Love is like a lump of gold,
Hard to get, and hard to hold.
Of all the girls I've ever met,
You're the one I can't forget.
I do believe that God above,
Created you for me to love.
He chose you from all the rest,
Because he knew I would love you best.
I've made a vow, to no one but you
I pledge my love to forever be true
I'll take care of you and treat you right
I'll lay beside you all through the night
I'll feed you and clothe you and keep you warm
I'll hug you and kiss you and give shelter in the storm
I'll help you and guide you and clear a path
I'll protect you and shield you from ANY angry man's wrath
I'll listen to your problems help you solve them too
I'll make you a rainbow and let the sun shine through
I'll take your side even if you're wrong
Just to prove that our love is very strong
I'll plant you flowers and make them grow
They'll be a symbol of love that only we'll know
I'll whisper your name when no one is near
So low that only you can hear
You'll feel my love even if we're apart
You'll know that we are one in heart

Tell me what ya think? Yay or Nay?

I like it..its very nice..lol nice work

Dang Im Sure she'll liek that but it depends on what type of girl she is. Cause i helped out on alot of relationships really. If shes a wild out of the open person she'll think its okk?? but if she is a shy caring girl loves to do whatever then GO FOR IT!!!!

Hey you know just one Question ??? How long did it take you to write ??!!!! 5 years ??
Na just kidding but it is certanly a Yay !!!!
Now i read it too my sisters and they al said it is very tuching and started crying so i think shell like it GO FOR IT !